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Here is an improved version of your sentences:
Yes, I think so. If a dog is off-leash, it might bite someone. If it hurts a child, that can be very dangerous.
Tips:
1. Use "off-leash" or "without a leash" but include the verb "is" to form a complete sentence ("If a dog is off-leash").
2. Replace "may bite some other people" with "might bite someone" for clarity and conciseness.
3. Use "if it hurts a child" instead of "if they hurt the child" because "they" is plural, and "a dog" is singular.
4. Break ideas into two sentences to improve clarity.