Good start. Let's slow it down: "We have a proposal to present to the client before the deadline, and the negotiation starts tomorrow." Now repeat that part after me....
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Good start. Let's slow it down: "We have a proposal to present to the client before the deadline, and the negotiation starts tomorrow." Now repeat that part after me.
Your sentence is clear but can be slightly improved for flow and formality:
"We need to present a proposal to the client before the deadline, as the negotiation begins tomorrow."
Tips:
- Use "need to" for urgency.
- Replace "and" with "as" to link the two related actions smoothly.
- "Negotiation begins" sounds more formal than "negotiation starts."