Great. Let’s break it down: “We have a proposal to present to the client before the deadline, and the negotiation starts tomorrow.” Now say it slowly after me: “We have a proposal to present to the client before the deadline, and the negotiation star...
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Great. Let’s break it down: “We have a proposal to present to the client before the deadline, and the negotiation starts tomorrow.” Now say it slowly after me: “We have a proposal to present to the client before the deadline, and the negotiation starts tomorrow.”
Here is an improved version of your sentence:
"We need to present our proposal to the client before the deadline, as negotiations begin tomorrow."
Tips:
- Use "need to" or "have to" for urgency.
- Specify "our proposal" to clarify ownership.
- Use "as" to connect related actions smoothly.
- Consider clarity and conciseness while keeping the original meaning.