Good. Let’s repeat that together, bit by bit:
“We have a proposal to present to the client before the deadline,”—repeat that....
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Good. Let’s repeat that together, bit by bit:
“We have a proposal to present to the client before the deadline,”—repeat that.
Your sentence is clear but can be slightly improved for flow and formality:
"We have a proposal to present to the client before the deadline, and the negotiation begins tomorrow."
Tips:
- Use "begins" instead of "starts" for a more formal tone.
- Consider breaking into two sentences for clarity: "We need to present a proposal to the client before the deadline. The negotiation begins tomorrow."