It's understandable to feel disappointed when a fighter doesn't perform at their best. Tyson's early career was marked by incredible energy and power. Many factors, such as conditioning and focus, play critical roles in a boxer's performance and outc...
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It's understandable to feel disappointed when a fighter doesn't perform at their best. Tyson's early career was marked by incredible energy and power. Many factors, such as conditioning and focus, play critical roles in a boxer's performance and outcomes.
Here's a corrected and improved version of your sentences:
"I was disappointed when McTavish was knocked down. I think he could perform much better if he had more energy."
Tips:
1. Use "could" instead of "can" to talk about hypothetical situations or possibilities.
2. Replace "lacks energy" with "had more energy" to clearly express the condition for better performance.
3. Keeping sentences simple and clear helps communication.
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